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White Snake

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At the end of the first day he stopped missing the light.
At the end of the second day he was too hungry and thirsty to think properly.
By the end of the third day he was wondering how long had passed unable to parse the time in the infinite darkness of the cell.

Cell was a generous word, it was a pit with no light, covered with a rock worked by a contraption to raise and lower it.

He liked to think, when his mind mustered the strength to do so, that the rock was because they were frightened of him.
How foolish he was.
Beaten he was, truly and now he waited for death wondering only if it would be hunger or some execution that ended him.

Then light, not much but enough to see and scraping of stone on stone. Someone had decided his fate and he regretted only that he lacked the strength to stand and face it, to reach out and defy one last time.

Still he found himself squirming. Working his weakened body up along the wall to what passed for upright while he could at least.
Strength was a gift and it spat in the War father's eye to not use every bit you had before your time.

Still the light, meagre as it was hurt his eyes as they fought to adjust and he found he had strength enough, if only barely that, to shield his face while the figure above looked down on him.

"I... was beginning to think... that you had forgotten about me."
His voice was dry and hoarse and weak but it carried in the silent darkness to his visitor.
 
Tyrnael Myrlochar peered down from above. Her face seemed somehow more severe than on the battlefield. In a sharp, clear voice, she called down to the prisoner. She betrayed neither hatred nor malice in her even delivery.

“Cretok! I am told you call yourself White Snake. I am Rahi-Valsharess Tyrnael, Ilharess Myrlochar, Yathallar of Maelzafan, the Queenslayer. I think you might agree that we have matters somewhat overdue for discussion. Will you come dine with me now, that we may discuss those matters?”

And then she awaited his reply.

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Part of him wanted to spit her offer back at her but his mouth was dry and the very idea of food was too necessary for his starving body to ignore. He did recognize her though, she was the one who routed his forces sent to aid Shay Tirlocc. He knew it was a bad idea from the start. Elfling treachery.

"I... accept!"

It was not glorious but he had been denied death already and he was not without curiosity. He'd let this Tyr...nal? Whoever she was feed him and who knows. He might get a chance to escape or die trying.

"Just... let me... clean up... first!"
His laugh caught in his throat like lint but he was too dry to sooth it and began to cough weakly.

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“Of course. My servants shall remain and help see to your dignity. Make use of them as you will. Consider it my apology, for my delay in remembering that you yet awaited me here. It is a newborn Queendom. There is no limit to the wealth, acclaim, and power that a warrior such as you might claim in its service… In two hours’ time, I shall receive you in my hall, where we shall discuss this further.”

She hissed commands, and a knotted rope was tossed down. She had already left the prison by the time he reached the top. Four nervous-looking slaves dressed in simple, dark red spidersilk gowns and slippers waited by a sturdy, ornately carved dark wood stool with wrought metal buckets of hot water, brushes, a pitcher of wine, and a large stack of folded dark red garments. A single spearman waited with them, in similarly hued though fancier livery - he offered a slight dip of his spear and a crisp stamp of attention. The whole area was of course teeming with guards in the Valsharess’s black livery.

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It took his a few long moments to be hauled from the put but the scrubbing was more than welcome. The wine however he drank sparingly, just enough to wet his mouth and sooth his throat.

If this was supposed to make him malleable it was not working. Still White Snake did not complain. Being pampered was not so bad and he did not have the strength to do it himself.

It didn't look like it with his still body and tired eyes but he was counting. Counting weapons, counting guards and counting steps to where he was led once all was done.

The doors opened and he stood, guards poking at him to go and itching in his spider silk clothes which were little more to him than fancy sleeping clothes.

"The Mistress will see..."

The guards voice quivered under his eyes. They shot through her and into the wall behind.

With as much steadiness as he could muster after starving for days White Snake wasted no time sitting at the long table of the hall and sighed. Everything was going to be effort.

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A few moments later, the table was laden with a roasted rothé calf, all manner of bluecap-flour buns and sweetbreads, a tray of rothé cheeses, as well as mushroom dishes of several different varieties. A large trencher was set before him, as well as utensils, a goblet, and another pitcher of wine. Two of the servants who earlier helped him bathe sat beside him, each with a thick napkin over an arm, apparently waiting on his needs. They wasted no time filling his trencher with whatever food he asked for or even looked at.

At the chime of the appointed hour, Tyrnael herself entered, dressed in Yathallar robes gathered beneath a pin depicting a stylized obsidian hand. She was followed by her brother, a foppish looking, stylishly overdressed mage at least a century her senior, and a much younger sister in acolyte garb. Even the older brother showed no signs of age; if anything, he looked at the very dawn of his prime. They were all seated in turn by the other two servants, who then stood behind her.

“You are punctual, White Snake. This is not unexpected - the honor of the Cretok is of course well known to our people. I know that your hunger is as great as your desire for vengeance, so please: continue to partake while I introduce you to who we are and what we offer you. My brother, Ferzil; my sister, Nemriel. We three are all who remain of House Myrlochar, which stood for centuries as the second house of Zar’Ahal, trusted regents of seven Valsharessen. Now we are barely tolerated upon the rise we once mastered. Lest you think we did not also suffer! My foolish mother, my hapless older sisters, and even two of my younger sisters, too low ranking to pick the side they stood upon - all died in service of the misbegotten usurper queen Dalrithia. My younger sisters were executed before our eyes by the Valsharess herself, on the eve of her coronation.”

“After we took Shay Tirloc, among many things we learned was that Dalrithia’s regent intended to sacrifice your entire company to our armies to avoid paying the price they promised you. My actions that you so deplored spared most of your company, who escaped to the surface, where they now mass with many other Cretok in alliance with the Valsharess. Only those who turned and attacked our forces, and mostly those who fought in support of your assault, were slain.”

“White Snake, just as we three were redeemed to service by our humiliation and loss, so I now offer you a chance for redemption, first in my service. My house has many young, inexperienced warriors but no weapon master to refine them. They are of course Drow, not Cretok, so I do not expect you to make them into great hulking champions such as yourself. But if you succeed at teaching them the focus, tenacity, and endurance you showed me at Shay Tirloc, I will make certain you get as many chances for glory in the Valsharess’s name as you can stomach. So. What say you?”

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White Snake ate, leaving no crumbs, no morsel untouched by his tooth. It was good, he favoured the breads and cheese mostly.

"Water!"

He said quickly. Putting the wine away. Drinking was for when things were done.
By the time Tyrnael and he entourage entered he was eating heartily and he barely stopped to listen. Her voice carried over to him and he quietly listened in between mouthfuls.

"You saved no one. Those who fled are dead."
As good as to the hearts and mind of his people anyway. The long teeth he sent back would carry word of his capture. They would be welcomed, not the rest.

He kept eating but paused a moment after he heard the word alliance before continuing. Things were happening on the surface. His father would not accept an alliance after what happened. So he could not help but wonder what happened to him in all this.

"You want me to work for you?"
The snort in his answer equalled only his surprise at the offer.
"To train these elflings?"
His laugh was short but loud as he pointed a fork at the one behind him who escorted him from the cells.
"This one shook like the last leaf of winter while I was being cleaned and the one outside froze at the glance of a half starved man. It would take a lot of work. Perhaps more years than I have."

He laughed again and took another drink if water and thought about his final answer. No doubt refusal would see him back in the pit to think it over or simply dead.
He did not suspect any poison in the food, that wouldn't match even elfling treachery. Deceit was in their hearts but not waste.
He eyed the man elfling and the girl whom Tyrnael had brought.

"These two, they do not speak?"
He asked wondering out loud and buying himself more time.
Perhaps they were mute, good. If so he'd have less to worry about. Better to keep them happy for now. Even if he made a run for it he did not know his way out and was far from Shay Tirloc where he had last had his bearings. The surface and his father was a long world away.

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The instant he asked for water, one of the surfacer slaves seated beside him got up, bowed quickly, and hurried off to the kitchen. She returned a few moments later with a steaming pitcher of water.

The tall, lanky ‘elfling’ Tyrnael had introduced as Ferzil shot up and strode over.

“If I may… White Snake, did my sister say? A cantrip to bring it to a more agreeable temperature. We do not drink water by manner of course in the Rise, you see. It needs boiling to be safely potable, for one thing. And there’s no boiling away the taste of sulfur. Besides… could you imagine? Fully sober Drow in such close proximity to one another? Why, we’d kill each other off to the babes and toddlers within the week.”

The young vestmented elfling stifled a giggle, earning a stern look from Tyrnael. Ferzil waggled his finger in a circle, and the steam quickly subsided.

“Room-temperature, or refreshingly chilled?”

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Tyrnael smiled as White Snake pointed out the guard’s fearful reaction.

“My brother seems to have already answered your question. My sister is sworn to silence unless asked to speak- a hopefully temporary devotion of her current rank within the temple. And you have already perceived my problem. Splendid.”

“We face an uncertain world and a distrusting city envious of my personal prestige. I am second-named of four whose word carries the weight of the Valsharess herself. Yet my House is disfavored and my home is watched and guarded by fresh graduates from cadre who have never faced deadlier opponents than other overly ambitious near-children within their own cohort. Foes who would instantly relent the instant their yathrin bored of the shedding of their blood.”

“Teach them to perceive, assess, plan, and react as you do. Be as harsh as you see fit. These waelen at least survived my mentor’s cadre, so they must have some degree of potential. Unlock it.”

“As for remuneration, authority, and respect. You shall have your own quarters whose sanctity only I may violate without your leave. You shall have your pick of servants from those already here, or newly purchased from the slave pens if none among our current stock suit you. These shall be your personal property. You shall enjoy ample salary, commensurate to your elevated position as my weapon-master. You shall choose your second from among your charges. Your authority within my house extends to all save us three. And you will only answer to me, the Valsharess, or others who wear this pin. Show respect to any who wear vestments such as mine. My rank carries a degree of protection for those who wear my livery; a tailor and an armorer shall be retained to garb and armor you to your satisfaction. Lastly, I am to be immediately informed of any transgressions against my protection that you should encounter. You may freely defend yourself if provoked, of course.”

If you swear yourself to my service. I await your answer.”

White Snake
 
Grissle stuck in his teeth and he picked at it with a nail.
"Hmm. That's a tempting offer. Room, food and a measure of freedom."

He took another bite and washed it down.
"I have questions and maybe a condition or two."

She waited, he took his time.
"You give me the position of weapon master, will your women obey me? Men are not considered much among your kind of I understand and I am... an outsider. It might be hard for them to accept me and my methods."
Eyeing those guards about the room he wondered at how they'd react to taking orders from him and could not imagine they'd be eager.

"And I want to know what happened to my gear."
He was really asking about his hood but she did not need to know that.

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Tyrnael’s eyes flashed briefly, but after a few seconds of consideration, she nodded slowly.

“If you are my weapon master, know that you shall manifest my power and my will. For anyone under your direct charge, to defy you is to also defy me. And I will brook no defiance from within my house. I welcome advice and opinions. I should be as foolish as my mother if I did not. But I will not be gainsaid, regardless of one’s fortunate or unfortunate gendering.”

Her eyes took on a flash of a wild gleam as she continued.

White Snake, you defeated or slew eleven of my army, all battle-hardened in countless skirmishes and battles against the Duergar and diverse other foes. It was glorious to behold, even though I do not lightly spend the lives of soldiers under my command. Know that I hold your abilities in the highest regard. For it was not your brute force that brought you victory, but a potency born of wrath and discipline.”

At his latter concern, she nodded.

“I do not know the disposition of your effects, but if protocol was followed, they are stored within the prison. I will send a messenger to inquire about them, and if possible, retrieve them. If protocol was not followed, I shall seek satisfaction on my weapon master’s behalf.”

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"Good, good."

With visible effort White Snake pushed the chair away from the table and stood on legs that still trembled under his malnutrition.

"My conditions then..."
He made his way slowly around the table bare feet on cold cut stone and trying not to look as tired as he felt.

"In these quarters I am to have I will make a shrine to the Pathfinder. It is never to be touched by any hand other than mine."
The WarFather could not help him now, he needed to seek other patrons.

"I also wish to be allowed to hunt on the last day of every month. What I kill will be mine to keep or discard in whatever ways I see fit. This practice is linked to my first condition."

He stopped a step away from the trio and cut his left palm with his tusk, forming a fist to encourage blood flow. One of the guards almost stepped forward.

"Lastly, you will meet me in my quarters in one hour, alone. I have a truth for you to hear that will effect my task here."

He offered Tyrnael his bloody left hand.
The hand that gives.

"I accept if you do."

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Tyrnael listened to his conditions, nodding. She arched an eyebrow at the last term, but nodded again.

“Those terms are acceptable. Your blood deserves mine.”

With a whirl of dark metal she produced a double bladed dagger, slicing her left palm, then rising to take the offered hand, pressing her blood into his, stone faced.

“Vyk’zlade T’pulli - White Snake in our tongue - I, Tyrnael Myrlochar, adopt you into my house, and name you as my weapons master. Once my houseguard have passed your standard and you are satisfied that your second may maintain such standard in your absence, I swear that I shall upon your request commend you unto the Valsharess to seek glory in her name. Maelzafan and House Myrlochar are my witnesses.”

She released their hands, wounds sealed but scarred, palms sticky with their blood commingled.

“That our pact be remembered.”

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Perhaps, White Snake thought to himself, there is something to be found here among his enemies turned patrons.

"I will retire now."

He flexed his hand, the small wound closed under the blood. dark and red melting together.

"I will await you there."

Turning on he bid the guard he had been eyeing approach him with his hand.

"You, take me to my quarters, bring the wine and more food. I am still hungry."

When the guard led him to the room he took the wine and food and left her outside, forgotten.

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Precisely an hour after their pact had been sealed, Tyrnael entered White Snake’s quarters. They had belonged to the previous weapon master, who certainly seemed enamored of weapons -the walls were lined with displays of them- but to his untimely end, he had been far less interested in their mastery.

Ever efficient and demanding the same efficiency of her servants, the young matron had eaten, removed her headdress and priestessly regalia, bathed, dried, and wore now a richly embossed, dark red spidersilk evening robe and matching spidersilk slippers. Her waist length silver braids swung unpinned from side to side as she walked. She stopped before him, inclining her head just slightly enough for the greeting to be noticeable, the motion conveyed far more by the sympathetic movement of her braids than by the actual degree of inclination. The four servants waited in the hallway outside.

“I am here as we agreed upon, Weapon-Master. Speak.”

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For his part White Snake had been examining the weapons and quarters, a bit lost in time.

"Good."

He had removed his silken shirt, it itched him.

"There's a huge problem in my way here."
He sat on the floor where the weapons were arranged in order of practicality.

"The secret to fighting like me, that tenacity you want to give your people, it's not training. It's loyalty. You don't have enough."

Picking up a blade he was unsatisfied with the weight so he put it behind him.
"A soldier does what he's told. A warrior does not need to be told. He does what his cause demands be it kill or die trying."

His eyes regarded her again as he drank from a cup next to him on the floor.

"They fear you and that lasts until they fear something else more than you. What you want, what you need, is to make them love you."

Without judgement he watched her response to this and drank some more.

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Tyrnael listened, arms crossed, nodding slowly.

"What you say is very likely true. Aside from my brother and sister, my house is populated by strangers. And my reputation is, shall we say, complicated. My recent fame is for bringing Valsharess Vyx'aria the head of the usurper Dalrithia. My family is best known for producing a long line of Regents - including my mother, Dalrithia's queenmaker - and as the greatest patrons of high society atop the Rise. Now the ballroom sits empty. The foyer seems comically long to walk to reach rooms largely empty except for the servants cleaning them. And around the Rise, everyone stares, as though our dark red livery be the raiment of ghosts, and I a banshee. What these young warriors must think of their lot! Even though my thoughts in seeking your service are truly for their benefit as much as my house's. Conflict is coming. All houses will be called upon to take part. My act of love is to prepare them for it, rather than letting them remain comfortable and green, only to fall by the dozen to warriors like you."

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